Celebrating World Poetry Day

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Today is World Poetry Day and I thought it might be fun to do a blog tour of poets who have had their poems published in The School Magazine as they are also celebrating their 100 year anniversary this year.

The first poem of mine that The School Magazine published If I Were a Giant (Orbit March 2005) marked the beginning of a decade full of submitting my poems for children to the magazine in the hope of receiving that wonderful letter (now email) saying…

Dear Jackie

Your manuscript has now been assessed by our editorial team.

The good news is that we think your piece would work well in The School Magazine and would like to purchase it.

These few words always make my day light up, my face light up and my heart light up. These few words confirm that I am what I say I am. A poet and that is very reassuring.

Don’t get me wrong I, like most writers I think, doubt my ability every single day. I just did a quick count of how many pieces I have submitted to the magazine over the last 11 years and it totals about 130. Of those 130, 21 have been published so more often than not I read these words…

Dear Jackie

Thank you for letting us see this manuscript submission. The Editorial Committee of The School Magazine have now had a chance to read it. The consensus is that it does not meet the current needs of the magazine.

These are sad days but not devastating days and after I’ve grieved a little I see what else I might be able to send in. It’s a lovely rock-a-by process that keeps me writing and sending and hoping and smiling and crying and on and on.

Below is a gallery that I have created of a few of the poems that The School Magazine has published over the years. I am so grateful for the opportunity to have been able to share my poetry through this wonderful magazine and I hope that you enjoy them as much as I enjoyed writing them and if you’d like to read more of my poetry you can go here.

Poetry Blog Tour

To continue with the blog tour please visit the links below and I hope you all have a wonderful World Poetry Day.

Claire Saxby

Janeen Brian

Julie Thorndyke

Lorraine Marwood

Pat Simmons

Rebecca Newman

Sally Murphy

Sophie Masson

Stephen Whiteside

Yvonne Low





Welcome Sally and Sonia to my blog – home to the PASS IT ON networking e-zine, thanks so much for visiting.

When I heard that you were looking for blogs to host your tour I was excited for two reasons.

1. Because both of you have been involved with PIO over the years and

2. because it is such an honour to play host to two such talented people.

The theme of  this blog post explores questions relating to how the book came about, where the idea came from, how the book was pitched, why Sonia was chosen as the illustrator, any hiccups on the way, that sort of thing.

So with those questions in mind, here are the responses from both Sally and Sonia. Thanks guys – fascinating stuff!!


Sally’s response…









The Evolution of a Story


Do Not Forget Australia tells the story of the French village of Villers-Bretonneux , which was destroyed in a battle during World War 1, liberated by Australian soldiers and is the site of a big memorial to fallen Australian soldiers on the Western Front. The townspeople there looked after Aussie soldiers stationed there, and have maintained the graves there for almost a hundred years. The people of Australia – particularly Melbourne – fundraised to help with the rebuilding of the town, and especially the school. This wonderful friendship is remembered by big signs at the school (in French and in English) saying ‘Do Not Forget Australia’.


I wanted to tell this story to children and, after research and thought, came up with the idea of focussing on the (fictional) story of a boy from the village and how his school was destroyed and rebuilt. It took me lots of drafting to come up with a story that worked. One problem was how to show the Australian side of this story. I wanted there to be a second child, in Australia, but needed to come up with a way for the two children’s lives to overlap.  In some drafts I did away with the idea of a second child completely, but after I submitted the story to Walker Books Australia, they suggested the need for a second child (which they didn’t know I’d already decided against) and so it was back to the drawing board.


Eventually I had a breakthrough. What if Billy, the Australian boy, had a father who was a soldier stationed in Villers-Bretonneux ? And what if that father met Henri, the French boy? The two boys would never meet, but they would share common ground, and could perhaps be aware of each other.


Eventually I had a story which Walker Books were happy with, and I signed a contract. Sometime later I was sent some art samples by an illustrator called Sonia Kretschmar. Did I approve of her work as a possible match for her story, my publisher wanted to know. I was stunned by Sonia’s work and said a very definite yet.


While Sonia worked on the art, I was busy working through edits which, as with every book, went through several rounds. Then the two started to come together in roughs, and proofs and dummies until, finally, earlier this year, I held the finished product in my hand.


It’s been a long process – I first decided I wanted to write this story in late 2007, and wrote the first draft on ANZAC Day 2008. But it’s been worth the time spent to get it just right. I’m really happy with the finished product – and hope readers are too.


Sonia’s response…



‘Do not Forget Australia’ is a parallel story set in France and Australia during World War 1. I think I was chosen for this project because I had a great time doing the research for ‘Song of the Dove’ (written by Errol Broome and published by Walker Books in 2011) which was set in Italy in the 1830’s. My zeal for historical accuracy, however, uncovered a couple of details in the story which needed to be tweaked (for example, on one spread the character ‘Henri’ looked over at the spire of the town’s church. I obsessed about finding reference for this spired church in 1917 Villers Bretonneux –  one didn’t exist there until it was rebuilt in that style in the 1920’s). The church was subsequently deleted from the story.



All up it took about 2 months for research and roughs, and about 6 months for finished art, but I always seem to run out of time (depicting crowd scenes and intricate machinery does not make it easy when you have a deadline) . I also seemed to have quite a bit going on in the first 6 months of 2011, which is when it was completed. It was a lovely project to work on, and I hope that I managed to capture some of the sadness and joy of the story and the time in which it is set.


Thanks girls for giving us some insight into how a picturebook story is born. Do Not Forget is Australia is a wonderful story that reminds us that even in times of war, in fact especially in times of war, friendships are still able to flourish.

To follow the rest of Sally and Sonia’s blog tour see below for a list of whens and wheres…








Things to look forward to…

Well it’s been a little while since I’ve blogged. My last post was in October! Where ever has the time gone?

So while I’ve got a five spare minutes I thought I’d let you all know about some exciting things that will be happening here or close by over the next few weeks.

On the 5th March (that’s Monday), of course there will be the next issue of PASS IT ON packed with lots of useful information. I  will also be chatting to Donna Smith over at Jelli-Beanz Publishing about my poem Dreamy that appears in Hopscotch – Jelli-Beanz’s first collection of hilarious short stories, side-tickling poetry and beautiful artwork.

On the 8th March (Thursday) I will be reviewing Tanya McCartney’s new book Australian Story – An Illustrated Time Line Packed with images from the National Library of Australia, Australian Story explores who we once were, who we are today and where we are going.

Tania is an author of children’s books, and adult non-fiction. You can find out more about Tania at her website.

On 12th March I will be catching up with Sally Murphy and Sonia Kretschmar as they discuss their new book Do Not Forget Australia published by Walker Books. Do Not Forget Australia is a powerful and moving story about hope, courage and the bond between France and Australia forged in World War One.

So as you can see there is lots to look forward to. I hope that you will pop on over and please leave any comments if you feel so inclined.